This Is A Good Start. It’S Good That You Touched On Culture, However, I’D Like

This is a good start
It’s good that you touched on culture, however, I’d like you to be more specific than acknolwedging there are differences
For example, I came across an interesting research study by Furtado, Marcen, and Sevilla (2013), looking at how a person’s culture from their country of origin affects their divorce rate
Their study sample was participants who were childhood immigrants to the US, so they were exposed to similar laws and institutions, but differed in terms of their cultural background
Interestingly, participants from countries with lower divorce rates were less likely to be divorced
Please bring in some specifics based on an outside source and/or the book
  Reference divorce
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